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Jacob Hem

Invention in F major

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Made an invention in F major. its heavily inspired by Bachs invention with the same name. Would love some feedback so I could improve and grow as a composer! The score is shown in the youtube video, but if you would really like the complete score, a link is in the youtube description

youtube:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QNhAO4RuTgw

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Very nice, clearly can hear the Bach inspiration.  My only critique is that the ending was a little abrupt with just the final chord.  I personally would have ended it with a small flourish breaking up the chord.

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Wow, It's not easy to write interesting counterpoint for only two parts, but that's so beautifull.

I agree the final is to abrubt. I would add a 2 beat perfect cadence on the last with some ritardando and fall on the tonic chord on the 3rd beat. 

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Sounds like Bach. Hopefully you've learned a lot from your studies with his music. Feel free to share your thoughts on others' works, you'll find more feedback!

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