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I was listening to your work on my phone, when I started texting people, at some point I stopped what I was doing so I could listen to the music. This is rare for me. I think there is some gorgeous music. I personally like the move from 1-3 being calm. But I felt like after that beautiful calmness of 3, you have set-up some anger, or vivace well. The longing of the soprano in the upper range and emotional ending to 3 was great. This tension exists in the first measure of 5, but disappears, I wanted a movement of it. This music made me realize I need to do better lol. Beautiful stuff

Lots of great use of changing colors to keep the same motif interesting. I think it is great as is, but if you were looking to add more, I would love some longer legato lines to add some contrast.

Have you had enough time to read it yet?

Just a friendly reminder to please try and keep the discussion strictly about the piece.

Interesting; I'll read it later.

Thanks Henry for pointing this out. @Churchcantor In your own words: So basically your posts so far could basically be summed up as "Haven't yet had the time nor mood to listen to it yet." I would rather hear what you might have to say about the music once you actually do listen to it, instead of posting 6 replies to my topic which don't discuss anything about the music. Before you replied, my topic had one reply by Chopin and was still on the "Works with Few Reviews" List. But now that you've cluttered the topic with meaningless posts, the topic is no longer on that list and is less likely to receive actual substantive reviews from the other members of the forum. There are places on the forum where you can post this kind of content though - such as in Off Topic - Journals. Or in the case of the Russian cartoon - either Random or Repertoire. Or you can tell your stories by posting status updates in your profile. But I think you are trashing the forum with the way you are currently using it.

Sounds like a good base, I'm excited to hear the final product

This is the best description for posted music I've seen, well done 😄 I liked this more and more as it went on. It kind of reminded me of the form of Bolero, just this giant crescendo of a piece. All the electronics and effects worked really well. At first I didn't think I would care for it, but as I said, by the end I wanted to replay it again. The ending caught me off guard too, very cool! I really like your Thom Yorke style of singing, you kind of sound like him too, especially when your vocals first entered. You a Radiohead fan? Your vocals became more emotional and unchained as it went on, I could really feel the pain. It was a bit much for me, but I think it fit the song well and shouldn't be altered. Awesome work mate! Keep the hits coming for my YC feed

Hey there Nikkol I knew I remembered you, I listened to your music before. These tracks are definitely an improvement, and I like the instrumental approach. 🙂 I think I liked Lana more than Carly, because you had many more moments with melody. That's something I would continue to pursue, because without vocals the music could sound kind of empty with just drums and rhythm guitar. I dig the drum parts too! Just make sure to keep practicing your craft because the drums and guitar are out of sync in places. Keep writing and posting, looking forward to hearing more guitar around here 😄

Your music is great! I listened to the three you posted, and they're all wonderful. This one was my favorite, thanks for sharing 🙂

Make it more chaotic. You are not Bach. Maybe listen to some of my works that were supposed to be fighting song for a game. I am going to put them on here later.

I just wrote a symphony in one movement, hope you like it! the video: 作品9之1 小交响曲_哔哩哔哩_bilibili

IT IS NOT UNRELATED: earlier in the post when I said I would listen to it yesterday and then did not?

I just feel weird you leave comments completely unrelated to the piece posted, maybe you can move to post in the Random post? That would be much more appropriate. Henry

By the way, I really DO want to hear this whole piece with the score; who knows, might be today!

He is not a musician, just fascinated by theory/composition, Henry! I don't mean "really" worn out, it's fun! I just mean I will be relaxing more, watching movies, etc.

This is really weird, but a 24-year-old Ukrainian kid stumbled onto one of my old, old YouTube posts, and he has become a sort of pen pal, and it is taking a lot of my time right now, so I'm often too worn out to keep my promises about listening to things, editing things right away. No biggie, but I'm pretty sure I won't write a piece for at least a couple months as well! No offence meant, of course!

Added more melodic material...I realized this week that I work SO slow b/c I analyze everything so much and don't let myself go and just write lol

This has nothing to do with anything, but the music in this Russian cartoon: МЫШКИ - МАЛЫШКИ. Сказка. СССР.«Киевнаучфильм». Реставрация. is awesome; not the cartoon, it is mediocre. I mean the music! That scraggy be awesome, if I may be permitted to use the colloquial. I can't write that good! Kind of a bit of jazzy Shostakovich in there, but he didn't write it. Might have to "steal" that one!

I still need more ideas for my third sonata. Anyways, @churchcantor did you listen to them yet? (Like the full thing). I can wait though. Don't disappear.

Thanks!

I'm glad you enjoyed it my friend and I love your humour 🙂

Hey, you know that Ravel once said to Gershwin when Gershwin tried to study composition with Ravel... Gershwin: Yo bro, you seem cool, can I study composition with you? Ravel: Nah... Gershwin: Why not? Ravel: I don't want to teach-... I meant why become an awful Ravel when you could become a perfect Gershwin? Gershwin: %$!@?٪35@DF3#^... Gershwin died of a heart attack. No. Just kidding! But you get the point. And yes, I did enjoy The music.