I love this. I've actually been going through a bunch of Beethoven sonatas recently, so this is right up my alley. The style, of course, is what I mean, not your voice. Although drenched in your heroes, your voice is your own.
First of all, congrats on performing this one. I know you mentioned some mistakes here and there, but who cares. You play beautifully. I really enjoyed the character you gave this in your playing. Your sense of rubato really made the music shine, something no computer could have recreated. As I toil at my computer rendering piano sound samples, your music reminds me that I should just practice more. You just get so much more out of your music with your performance. The subtle changing of pace in the chorale sections, or the lovely rubato you give to the dolcissimo (which by the way, you can play lightly!), all make this recording wonderful to the handful of times I've listened to it by now. You should be proud of your playing, and any imperfections you come across can be fuel for you to continue your studies at the instrument you already play so well.
I like how clear and defined your sections are, which I'm guessing is from how well you give cadence to your themes and phrases. I'll mention some favorite parts of mine:
-The chords at bar 17 and 25, along with the pesante minor sections were very nice. I especially love the second theme, it's striking how much I was able to feel the emotions from building up the A theme into it. Well done!
-the con delore section was awesome, and I really liked the minor 9th created in bar 90
-I really liked the fast movement in the left hand at bar 99. Very powerful stuff. One thing that I would have done differently is maybe built up to those faster passages a little more. For instance, in the con delore section, I would have put a little more movement in it with eighths then possible sixteenths instead of keeping that stricter chorale structure. Maybe it could have led into it a bit smoother? Something to consider for the future as this piece is done already!
-AND, I really liked how you kept all of that fast movement to go back into the A theme
-I thought the dolcissimo section was really cool. At first I thought it was out of place, but it was a great way to give your piece a coda AND have a transition into a similar style in your second movement.
I listened to both movements together, and I feel like this is a great start of a beautiful sonata. I think a big strength in your music is your ability to make everything connected and coherent. There's no question Beethoven's thematic unity has rubbed off on you, but you were able to create something of your own despite heavy influence. Your sound in this piece is something that I very much enjoy listening to for pleasure rather than with my analytic composer hat on, so I'm sure I'll be revisiting this one! Thanks for sharing Henry, I'm excited to hear it in it's entirety 😄