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Heyoh fellow musicians!

What does this remind you of? I'm searching for a name...:hmmm:

Also, how much does it bother you that it has the same chord proggression nearly all the way through?

Thank you for feedback!

 

EDIT: Thank you all for your responses! :) I chose a name and ended up writing a poem when searching for a fitting image. If anyone's still listening, I'd love to know how you think the name, image, poem and music work together! ^^  The Image is this: https://pixabay.com/en/piano-rose-yellow-1239729/

 

Past is what haunts us the most, meanwhile

The nest we escape from its ghost

Seeking what chains us with comfort

Dreaming of all that we long for

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Let us meet on Youtube too: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCiDsdsnIOb3_GYfTnMEzP3A

 

 

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F# minor is always kind of a lamenting-type key... A major is my favorite, so it's like the underbelly of happiness to me.

Lament, nostalgia, reminiscence, etc. Those types of words will work.

To answer your second question, it admittedly does kind of bother me that it follows the chord progression over and over... maybe you can avoid this by putting some voices in canon with each other? It wouldn't normally on its own, but I think the fact that this piece is clearly laid out into different sections makes it more apparent. 

Cheers

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same chord progression over and over again is quite common for bgm of some online games or photo story as it creates something like a rotary motion going round and round, so may not be a problem. but if this is not your purpose, it would be better if you make some changes to it

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