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Mysteries in the Sky and Beyond

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"There will be signs in the heavens"


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Nice. A very good feeling of progression as this went along, with things being used sparingly up until the point where it was their time. Cool chord choices for the main melody, I particularly like the B half-diminshed 9th you used to resolve to the tonic again. But I feel like you could have branched out a little more rather than adding tones on top of the old chords to feign a chord change... for example adding an A-flat chord with the tonic in the bass could give a new added sense of consonance that the listener hasn't gotten yet. Things like this are often subtle, but illicit a lot of different feelings. Cheers!

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