June 6, 20178 yr This is just a simple composition, and the ironic thing is it's based on "Seoul", but Seoul is supposed to be loud and crowded like New York City. But my rendition of it is sorta... calm. Anyway, if I hear some great feedback from you guys, it will help my composing experience, and that will help to improve this tune even more! Edited June 6, 20178 yr by Arthur1124
June 6, 20178 yr There was a brief section after the V6 chord where you play with G+ (or F diminished 7th) and it really kind of threw me off. I just wasn't expecting it. It was better executed in the other times it came around. Changes in sectional dynamics and timbre were really nice. Sometimes I wish the drum beat and bass rhythm would change a little bit more, but the groove was nice nonetheless. Nice work!
June 8, 20178 yr Author On 6/6/2017 at 3:20 PM, ilv said: Good job. I would just add a tail at the end because it sounds incomplete to me. Well, it's a loop...
June 8, 20178 yr 39 minutes ago, ilv said: Okay, I got it. Then it's not really an exact piece of music, but a loop, right? ???
June 9, 20178 yr 4 hours ago, Arthur1124 said: Yes, it's a loop. It's self-explanatory, Monarcheon. I wasn't talking about you. I don't know why ilv called it not an "exact piece". I'd just never heard it put like that before.
June 10, 20178 yr Wow! I love it! I catched myself on dancing with my head and feet, which is a good sign. I like the rhythms in the bass line of the piano and the (bass) guitar. Well done!
August 16, 20178 yr Author On 6/10/2017 at 4:31 AM, Maarten Bauer said: Wow! I love it! I catched myself on dancing with my head and feet, which is a good sign. I like the rhythms in the bass line of the piano and the (bass) guitar. Well done! Hahaha thank you
September 3, 20178 yr Author On 6/6/2017 at 9:30 AM, Monarcheon said: There was a brief section after the V6 chord where you play with G+ (or F diminished 7th) and it really kind of threw me off. By the way, which part are you talking about? Can you tell me the time of when that part happened?
November 22, 20178 yr Author On 9/2/2017 at 7:55 PM, Fernando Ocegueda said: Damn, i loved the sound of the keyboard Very good work! Which keyboard are you actually talking about? The rhodes piano, or a synth?
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