Oliver Nosaczynski Bohovič Posted June 11, 2017 Share Posted June 11, 2017 Hi everyone! This is a kind of a minimalist piano piece of mine. It§ s called "Rain" because of the free form and due to the fact that except for the recurring theme, it is heavily improvised and it is supposed to remind of raindrops. I hope you will like it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted June 14, 2017 Share Posted June 14, 2017 I did something very much like this years ago. You pulled it off much better Move out of Mixolydian and Dorian in the beginning and the ending a little more. I think you'll find that polyscale pieces work with pieces within short spans of time as opposed to the sectionalized version you have here. I just say this since the repetition started getting to me even before you went into the Lydian section, especially after since it felt overdone. It's very well harmonized and serene. Good job! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oliver Nosaczynski Bohovič Posted June 18, 2017 Author Share Posted June 18, 2017 On 14. 6. 2017 at 8:13 PM, Monarcheon said: I did something very much like this years ago. You pulled it off much better Move out of Mixolydian and Dorian in the beginning and the ending a little more. I think you'll find that polyscale pieces work with pieces within short spans of time as opposed to the sectionalized version you have here. I just say this since the repetition started getting to me even before you went into the Lydian section, especially after since it felt overdone. It's very well harmonized and serene. Good job! Thank you very much for your very constructive comment! :) is there anywhere i can listen to your piece in the similiar style that you've mentioned? :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oliver Nosaczynski Bohovič Posted June 18, 2017 Author Share Posted June 18, 2017 On 11. 6. 2017 at 10:24 PM, ilv said: Good job. My only suggestion is to make the sixteenth notes unmeasured tremolo, which would make it more raindrop-like. Thank you so much! :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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