instrumental guitar music

hi there!
i'm self-learned composer and musician.
wanna share here my new short trio.
i played all instruments by myself.
it's not masterly, i haven't illusions ))

thanks in advance for any kind of critique about composition in this piece of music.

This is so charming! :) Couple things I hear:
1. The rhythmic integrity of the main motive is a little spotty at times... especially when doubled. Having better support for it might be better.
2. The triplet section in the middle could definitely use the support of the third guitar a lot more even for grounding, rather than counterpoint (multiple melodies at the same time). It just sounds so relatively empty.
3. The ending I found a little weird, since it cuts the normal period length by half and ends on a kind of awkward tonic stepwise motion that I never really liked as a technique, but can see the purpose of it. 
4. The opening is a little strange too because it uses the tonic note sparingly, so audiences will think of it in either D minor or F major because it lines up. Maybe have the Bb played just a little bit earlier...?
It's really good. Good performance too!

17 hours ago, Monarcheon said:

Couple things I hear:
 

 

yeah!

it same that i find the right place.

have study many books & tack-works from different сenturies.

the books tell me that i need professional critique for my music.

it's the only way for growing.

what i can do with comments "i like it", "love your music" etc.? )))

i'm really hear now what you tell me from 1 till 4.

will think abt it for my next music.

many thanks to you and wellcome for comments with my next piece of music.

hope it will be ready in september.

have fan!

Hi

I would remark the part Monarcheon mentioned with triplets. It's true it sounds a bit empty.

On the other hand the sounds you get with guitars are beautiful.  In all, I think it's very nice.

On 03.08.2017 at 3:53 PM, Luis Hernández said:

Hi

I would remark the part Monarcheon mentioned with triplets. It's true it sounds a bit empty.

On the other hand the sounds you get with guitars are beautiful.  In all, I think it's very nice.

 

hi

it's the minor trio in 6/8.

lower guitar play harmonic figuraton, upper guitar have a solo.

trio mixed with a kitchen sounddesign for contrast with main part.

i still never try to write two voices under harmonic figuration.

so, will try next time.

thanks for positive feedback abt my guitars technique, i have practice with it more than 30 years. but my juzzguitar friend tell about it "not good, not professional" )))

by the way, he asked for notation of it.

he want give it to him students for show me right way for play )))

have a nice weekend!