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Hey guys.  This is one of my first pieces that I can see really turning into something I like, but I've run myself into a corner.  I'd like to see what you think and I would love it if you had any suggestions regarding how to continue the piece.  Thanks!

Alright, it took some messing around, but I finally figured out how to make my file into an mp3.  I hope this one works.

Edited by Charlie Carroll
Initial file failed to play audio

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fishyfry    47

Hi Charlie. I think there may be some kind of problem with your upload. When I attempt to download it, I get an error message saying "We could not locate the item you are trying to view"

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The first part sounds like the soundtrack of a popular film, of which I do nlt know the name at the moment. I like the harmonies.

The second part is a huge contrast with the first part. Maybe too big? I don't know. . . I like this part as well. Its vivid, exciting atmosphere is nice. When you have run yourself into a corner, stop writing for this piece until you have inspiration again. You could try to develop some themes and motives.

Providing feedback without a score is pretty hard, but I have tried my best.

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