bkho Posted September 3, 2017 Share Posted September 3, 2017 A short etude I wrote today while taking a break from larger works. I actually thought it came out pretty nice considering I wrote it in less than a day with is really unusual for me. Score is attached but forgive the untidiness. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Etude in E major - Bryan Ho > next PDF Etude in E major - Bryan Ho Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted September 3, 2017 Share Posted September 3, 2017 Like it. It goes so fast that I almost don't perceive the difference in the right hand when it is staccato. For me is a kind of motivic ostinato with changes in the left hand. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bkho Posted September 3, 2017 Author Share Posted September 3, 2017 16 minutes ago, ilv said: Nice little piece. I noticed some potentially mistakes in terms of how the notes fit together (harmony). If you need further explanation, please let me know. I'd appreciate that! I'm sure I have a few false notes here and there I wouldn't mind polishing it up a little. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bkho Posted September 3, 2017 Author Share Posted September 3, 2017 20 minutes ago, Luis Hernández said: Like it. It goes so fast that I almost don't perceive the difference in the right hand when it is staccato. For me is a kind of motivic ostinato with changes in the left hand. Thanks! That's the way I approached it with a simple rhythmic motive with overlying arpeggios. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maarten Bauer Posted September 3, 2017 Share Posted September 3, 2017 Very nice! I like the contrast between staccato and normal (sostenuto) and legato. Furthermore, I appreciate it that you composed an etude that is meant to improve the pianist's, but also sounds like joyful music. As a classical saxophonist, I had to learn A LOT boring etudes that were basically just scales or triads... This does not promote the motivation to practice two hours a day. Well done! I am curious: can you play it yourself? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bkho Posted September 4, 2017 Author Share Posted September 4, 2017 On 9/3/2017 at 4:09 PM, Maarten Bauer said: Very nice! I like the contrast between staccato and normal (sostenuto) and legato. Furthermore, I appreciate it that you composed an etude that is meant to improve the pianist's, but also sounds like joyful music. As a classical saxophonist, I had to learn A LOT boring etudes that were basically just scales or triads... This does not promote the motivation to practice two hours a day. Well done! I am curious: can you play it yourself? Thanks for the comments! Unfortunately, I am a mediocre violinist and can't play piano at all though I think this is playable at the indicated tempo. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bkho Posted September 4, 2017 Author Share Posted September 4, 2017 On 9/3/2017 at 4:30 PM, ilv said: I would first fix what you believe is incorrect. Some of the spots I found: 0:4: parallel octave 0:10: the right hand should probably play an E rather than D# 0:11 and 0:12: D# in left hand not appropriate, that progression sounds harsh 0:18: E preferred over D# 0:29: C# preferred over D# 0:52: a diminished triad is not nice, so I think the lower B in the right hand should probably be a C# Thanks. I identified and fixed what I think were the more glaring offenders. I appreciate your pointing them out to me! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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