Rabbival507 Posted November 10, 2017 Share Posted November 10, 2017 (edited) Maybe I should stop with the food joke. Idk, it's just that I've been composing music for over three years, and I count my music level as more than starving. I'm not over-fed though. There's my four hands nocturne. I composed it as a game ost (cause I really thought I could make a game). Please give it a listen and tell me what you think. *Yes, I know the bass line is repetitive. I composed it in a game-like style for a situation that nothing really happens. Try to listen with that in mind. Edited November 10, 2017 by Rabbival507 MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Night at the street > next PDF With username instead of real full name 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted November 10, 2017 Share Posted November 10, 2017 I really like it. The bass line is beautiful and having four hands it doesn't sound bad at all. It's very sweet and peaceful. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maarten Bauer Posted November 11, 2017 Share Posted November 11, 2017 Lovely work. It is restful, because the music is clear: you have a nice melody and an effective accompaniment. I know it is hard to write for quatre mains, because there are so many lines you 'need to' fill in, but you don't have much variety in timbre like in an orchestra. In my opinion, you can improve the lay-out of the score. Just a little bit more articulation markings so that the performers know what you want. I think you did very well. Great job! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rabbival507 Posted November 11, 2017 Author Share Posted November 11, 2017 @Maarten Bauer Thanks for the feedback :) What do you mean by "articulation"? Words that describe the way I want it to sound? Like "gloomy" in some parts and "lively" in others? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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