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Hi everyone! I joined the forum today and i want to share two of my recent compositions. I'm not very good guitar player so please forgive my mistakes :blush: These are my compositions. I'm very new to this stuff and i would be very happy if you shared your critique with me.

Dernière Valse

Coeur Fissuré

Edited by Caspian Moon
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Lovely concert pieces. Lovely contemporary harmonies. Lots of 7th chords. Nothing to say about the waltz. It's very authentic. Your use of a diminished triad in "Coeur Fissure" wasn't optimal. C major first inversion triad would work better. I felt the melody could be more embellished sometimes, though I don't know if it's technically possible.

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