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October's Lullaby


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One of my friends invited me to "Inktober" challenge, but I can't paint that good, so I decided to make this piece as an answer to her 🙂

This is an ambient piece written and arranged by me. I hope you enjoy!

DAW : FL Studio
VST Instruments : EZKeys (Dream Machine, Room Celeste preset), Serum (for Pads), Kontakt 5 (Chris Heins Solo Cello)
VST FX : Fruity Delay 3, Blackhole Reverb, Valhalla Shimmer, Fruity Compressor, Fruity Parametric EQ2

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I'd fix some of your levels. When the cello comes in it's extremely loud in comparison, especially with the effect in the background.
I like the use of suspended chord changes, but it becomes a bit predictable when the arrival chord's extensions are so diatonic. There's a lot of potential with the pattern you've established, just be a bit more experimental.

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This piece speaks to me.  I think it is one of your strongest compositions, on several levels.  Balance out some levels..  I assume that is rain you bring in at about 1 minute.  I've found you only need to introduce and then fade out a sound effect like that, The brain's 'persistence of memory' will take over.. The brain otherwise will quickly re-difine generic rain, as noise, an it starts to detract from piece.  You've got some really fine things going on here..  I'd love to hear it longer..  EXCELLENT

 

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