Pietro17 Posted March 12, 2019 Share Posted March 12, 2019 This is a piano concerto I am composing now. I will succesively post remaining movements. The second movement is a slow siciliano, in my feeling it's a bit too short but when I think what I could add, I don't have any ideas :/ what do you think? MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu 2 adagio > next PDF 2 adagio Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted March 13, 2019 Share Posted March 13, 2019 It' nice. I think that the left hand in the piano should change at some point. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jared Steven Destro Posted March 19, 2019 Share Posted March 19, 2019 I thought this was a good foray into writing a concerto -- I will say that I found it to resemble Bach's Siciliano movement (BWV 1053, ii) a bit too much. I think that it can be beneficial to have models like this, though only as a starting place (for instance, as a basis for the form of your piece). With that said, I think that you manage the textures quite well and that you do a fair job organizing your material. I would not necessarily say that it is short, though, I would avoid thinking of composition in this way. I feel that what's more effective is thinking about how well you explored the areas created by what material you have presented. For instance, asking yourself questions like, "Have I developed my motifs/melodies/textures in a way that is satisfactory?" or, "Am I pleased with how I crafted my music?" Questions like these can help you stay grounded and oriented when writing; either way, it is always safe to say that you have to start somewhere in order to get to where you want. Good job! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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