August 3, 20196 yr Hello, I'll be very glad if you check out my song and tell your opinion. https://soundcloud.com/selcukozer001/a-rose-in-winter
August 6, 20196 yr Hi, Does your song have words? I think I would be tempted to take it at a slightly slower pace and give it more sustain pedal, give the piece room to breath. The last few heavy chords were a bit too much for me too, although it would probably make more sense with a voice track added. I liked it though.
August 7, 20196 yr The phrases are unclear as is the meter. I'm not sure if this is intentional or not. Do you have the score to post here - it would help.
September 2, 20196 yr Author Dear @Mark101 and @Ken320 Thanks for your comments and feedback. The song doesn't have words. I thought I would add lyrics to the song if it is good enough. I think you both right about your opinions. I think I will reuse the phrases in another song. Thanks for your review again :)
September 2, 20196 yr 10 minutes ago, .Em. said: > next On 8/3/2019 at 12:23 PM, selcukozer001 said: On 8/3/2019 at 12:23 PM, selcukozer001 said: I agree with the above replies. Almost sounds like the computer piano is playing. (Sorry for the wording i hope you get what i mean) but i liked it! Looking forward to hearing it revised
September 8, 20196 yr Author Hi @.Em. Thanks for your feedback. Actually the computer played the piece. Unfortunately I am not a performer 😞 I dream that one day my compositions would be so good that some performers will play it 🙂 Anyway thanks for your feedback again.
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.