September 11, 20196 yr Fifth nocturne. Maybe too repetitive but not completely sure. Please do give feedback if you have any. Thanks very much.
September 13, 20196 yr I think your harmonic language here is lovely. You have great ideas! As for repetitiveness: you do include a repeat, but only for a 12-bar theme, so that’s not particularly egregious or anything. I would at least vary the theme from ms. 33 on, when you return to your original theme, if I were you. Whether you want to do this in a simple or complex way is up to you. There are potential benefits and downsides to either choice. I think this is a lovely little piece. Thanks for posting! ☺️
September 13, 20196 yr I enjoyed this very much! I don't think it was too repetitive. The refrain sounds beautiful. I like how the end doesn't feel like the end but makes me go back to the beginning. I would love to learn to play this! Thank you for sharing!
September 17, 20196 yr Author Thanks for the feedback and comments on the piece @SergeOfArniVillage and @.Em.. I'll have a look at varying m 33 on. Probably will go for a simple variation.
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