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Fifth nocturne. Maybe too repetitive but not completely sure. Please do give feedback if you have any. Thanks very much.

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I think your harmonic language here is lovely. You have great ideas! As for repetitiveness: you do include a repeat, but only for a 12-bar theme, so that’s not particularly egregious or anything. I would at least vary the theme from ms. 33 on, when you return to your original theme, if I were you. Whether you want to do this in a simple or complex way is up to you. There are potential benefits and downsides to either choice.

 

I think this is a lovely little piece. Thanks for posting! ☺️

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I enjoyed this very much! I don't think it was too repetitive. The refrain sounds beautiful. I like how the end doesn't feel like the end but makes me go back to the beginning. I would love to learn to play this!

Thank you for sharing!

 

 

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