August 23, 20214 yr Another nocturne. Currently working on the score Nocturne in D Flat Major .mp3 Edited December 29, 20214 yr by jejrekmek
August 25, 20214 yr I like it, but I feel like you use richly voiced accompaniment much too often without a break. It's like eating rich food all the time - likely to give one indigestion. That might be part of the style but I feel like it would have given the piece a nice contrast because changing the accompaniment to be more sparse somewhere in the piece would give the piece a different texture momentarily. Also - for some reason I hear the music coming through the left speaker only. Maybe you can't record in stereo? I had that problem back on my old machine/set-up. This feels like a nicely through-composed piece and in a way that's an asset to your melodic constitution - it feels very improvisatory. But at the same time I feel like it could benefit from more melodic structure such as using periods, double periods or sentences to organize the phrases instead of connecting the melodies with chromatic fioraturas. Still - nonetheless enjoyable to listen to. Thanks for sharing!
September 30, 20214 yr Author On 8/27/2021 at 12:37 AM, Luis Hernández said: Quite beautiful. It would be nice to see the score (just to learn). Here you go Edited December 29, 20214 yr by jejrekmek
November 20, 20214 yr I don’t have much to say, because I second everything Peter said. I love that you used a dotted rhythm for the chromatic scales, I don’t often hear it like that (similar to Chopin’s Op. 9 No. 3) and that was really neat. Love the passion in your playing, and you have a great ear for “delicious, sweet” harmonies — reminds me of syrup😊 Thanks for sharing!
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