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Hi again @kaiyunmusic! What a wonderfully sweet and relaxing piece! The musical content itself is great and I wouldn't change a thing about it! My only critique is with how you notated this. I would notate it like this instead: Your version is essentially in cut-time (or otherwise known as 2/2) while this version is in 4/4. What program do you use? If you wanted to convert your score to look like this you could select all of your notes and there should be some option somewhere for diminution by half or "paste at half duration" or something. Thanks for sharing!

hey hey! i've been composing for around three months I think, and I would like to hear some feedback of my stuff 😛

Thanks! but I don't really want to. I'm not really into old/1800 music, and I don't use discord.

Hello! I finished a new piano song that I had fun playing and started as a sketch last summer. I'm happy to finish it! I hope you enjoy ~

That's actually easy to change. When the first note of the phrase is selected, Control-T brings up the little speaker icon above the staff. Then you click on it, and select "classic phrasing". (Why they've chosen to have portamento phrasing by default is beyond me!)

Bravo! What a pleasure to come back to take a look at the forum and find a whole beautiful sonata ready for a wonderful listen. Thanks, @Henry Ng Tsz Kiu As usual I wish I jotted down notes to articulate a nice meaningful helpful constructive and honest critique, but I haven't, so here's my superficial impressions. Wow! Dancing letters, and bird calls, and Beethoven quotes and spirit, and pentatonicisms, and random pauses, and self-citations, and myriad more things, all packaged in an incredibly cohesive and consistent dialogue that both stays within the confines of classical forms and pushes the envelope. At the same time?!? how do you do this? With mastery and an uncanny passion for c sharp minor, I guess? There are so many bits and parts that I loved (the andantino variation, the way the second movement - that to me started meh - grew on me maybe especially with the wonderful g flat section, the smartness of the scherzo, the interesting comfort of the first movement, where first and second theme look so alike, and yet are so different...), and not a lot that I did not enjoy (I remember a forte section in the second movement that seemed to me was compromising the balance of the movement, something in the general architecture of scherzo that did not persuade me, except that the middle section makes anything forgiven). Speaking of the mid section of the scherzo, that is such an interesting way to stay within the form, and yet - but with elegance and taste - step outside of it, a little self-referential joke about musical forms themselves, smart but also elegant and pretty to listen to, cerebral but lovely to the ear. Bravo! It is a real joy to listen to this, thanks again!

@PeterthePapercomPoser Thank you for the comment! At first thought I would like a gradual build up from the piano part, so I made the texture thinner and let the piano play first. Perhaps a short introduction will work. An example I can think of is Rachmaninoff's version of Liebesleid. Let me try and share again:)

Is that the secret manual for understanding this Scherzo 🤪

I might as well publicize the Google sheet since you're not the first to mention it: Scherzo Index

Yo Peter! Sorry I have been late to the party, due to laziness lol. Although I have listened to your excerpts tons of times, this is the first time I listen to a movement in full and with score. I must say, it sounds even more fascinating with a score at hand! I thoroughly enjoy this even though I have zero exposure to FF world, thx to my strict mum (time to blame your mum for a miserable childhood when you fail yourself in your real life lol!) I cannot and will not distinguish those 8 themes haha, just like Wanger's Leitmotifs which I can never remember their originals when they reappear at all lol. My most familiar theme is probably the Terra's theme because it usually starts a variation in imitation. I think this one really fits for a Scherzo. It sounds like an adventure and joyous wanderings but there is dark power underneath though not very apparent at the moment I guess. Btw, what are the short forms for the code of each of the 8 themes in the rehersal markings? The whole orchestration for me is fascinating and I will for sure steal something from here to my orchestration variations on your themes lol. lemme just take note of some spots I like: Beginning: I love all those imitations for the Terra Theme, it sounds like each team member is following the team's footstep into a journey to fxxk off the monster or final big boss, and the stretto treatment of the imitation gives excitement right at the beginning. The marching rhythm underneath with Timpani, Tuba, Cello and Double Bass is a pattern I should steal, though I may use add a bass drum to the snare drum as well. I also love both the Dorian C# and Phyrgian F natural in your themes as it really adds the folkore colour in the work. b.21 R Var.3: Love the very low register oboe, sounds dark to me. Since I'm also using harps in writing your variation, will you also follow the performance practice to the pedals the harp is using at the moment? You know what, I always get headached when I need to check whether the pedal notes of the harp is right. b.42 ES: Love the wind sextet setting, and then the string quartet plus horn setting. Sad the weird Musecore string sound sample which ruins the melody by always sliding ludicrously! b.72 FP Var.2: Love you start introducing the polyrhythm in flute in b.81, which will be used later for climax. Also, I really love the parallel fifth bass in b.89 as it sounds so prefectly disturbing! b.97 EA: I absolutely love the buildup here with both the tempo acceleration, tremolo, shorter and closer notes and more dissonances. I like the cilmax in b.117 esp. with the electric bass. Though, will it be great to add some brass here as well? It sounds a bit thin for a fff dynamic here for me personally. b.117 Scherzo beginning: I love the beginning. Though maybe for me I would also add a harp and a piano playing the low E here for that particular timbre, if there's not cost adding them haha. The new theme sound so peaceful, but the BD theme sounds greatly weird haha. I love the tremolo beneath and also your modulation to other keys here in b.170, since the music more or less stays in the tonal centre E for couple of minutes and it's the right time to add new things into it. And that G-Bb reinterpreted as G-A# to F#-B in flute, wow. b.180 L Var.3: Nice counterpoint between winds and horn themes even I forget where do the themes come from at all, and nice clash in b.183. b.196 FA: I really love the modulations here towards the hexatonic keys, they don't sound cliche as in many film music. The harmonic colour here is fascinating! Though, I may add a cresc. to ffffffff before the rests in b.207 and 211. b.218 AS Var.1: Nice relaxation! Nice imitation throughout as well. The polyrhythm from b.81 reappears as well. And that goddamn modulation to Db major in b.258!! It sounds so magical and refreshed after all those sharp key areas! But, it's so short!!!! And ruined immediately by the Kafka theme. Love the outburst of hextaonic G# minor and F minor at the end. It sounds unfinished which it should be for there are movements to follow. I remember Peter has an entire excel spreadsheet for all the themes he uses in each of the variation LoL!!!!!!!!!!!! Honestly I didn't remember any details in it due to my lazy nature lol. Very enjoyable! Looking forward to your other movements!! Henry

Thanks Peter! I'm not familiar with Outlaw Star, but I have heard some of the music from cowboy bepop. As I recall some of the composers from the Shinobi games originally worked under Joe Hisaishi, who went on to score studio Ghibli films, and I've always kinda heard a bit of his influence in the games.

Yes, that part is in fact Eb Lydian Dominant, otherwise known as the Acoustic scale since it contains all the first and most prominent harmonics of the harmonic series. Good eye/ear! This is the original material from the Mt. Kolts Theme: The scale used here is Eb Lydian #2 and is the sixth mode of the harmonic minor scale. Thanks for your interest!

No I was actually looking at 170-173. It doesn't look diatonic there because of the recurring A natural. Is this E flat Lydian Dominant?

Yes, in the UK we always use concert pitch for the conductor's score. I let MuseScore handle the transposing instrument part scores; but always check them for mistakes.

Guess I am basically a Neoclassical composer, with some Romanticism no stronger than Brahms, Mendelssohn, or Rachmaninoff. Strange how the Baroque slips in; can't explain it myself!

Hey @Mooravioli! What an underwhelming piece to have as the first ensemble piece that you've had performed and recorded! I feel like your style is hard to get into, but it definitely gains from repeated listenings. The listener gains more and more affinity for this piece upon repeated listenings I mean. It's very esoteric to get into though. But I love your use of flutter-tongue and slap-tongue on the saxophone! Great use of extended techniques. Though I think that the music could be more unified and self-similar. I don't find myself whistling or humming a tune after listening to this piece. Besides just having cool techniques and unusual chords and progressions I think it's also important to give the listener a long-leading melodic line and a clear theme. But that might just be my opinion, and I'm a very thematic composer. You do you, of course. Thanks for sharing!

Hello again @HoYin Cheung! First, I have to say that I love this piece! I've played it in recital back in my university days. I also love the idea of arranging this for a solo Violin - Piano duet! It will definitely make for some very musically intimate moments between you and your g/f that only this kind of music can create! I do have a minor critique of your arrangement however - I feel like the Violin and Piano should start together, doubling the main melody at the same time. I think it sounds like something is missing when the piano starts alone, without the Violin and it's also too much like the original. I think you should endeavor to make your arrangement different from the original from the very beginning, to make potential listeners aware that this is an arranged version from the very beginning. That's my humble opinion. Every other part of the arrangement is great! Thanks for sharing!

very nice, I look forward to it (always good to introduce simplicity into the mix too) and thanks for giving me a like on my old post!

Hey @Mooravioli! Thanks for your review! Stay tuned for that in a future movement! I've already composed a variation which does this, I just haven't integrated it into a finished movement yet. I feel like it wouldn't be in the spirit of the original themes by Nobuo Uematsu to use microtones since they didn't use microtones. Although I definitely plan on writing plenty of my own microtonal VGM music in the future. Thanks again for your review!

Sounds awesome! Really like how all the instruments sound together. The timing of the notes gives a feeling of slipping and unpredictability. I imagine this would fit in a game where you need to move carefully to make you feel unstable. Or simply a horror game full of surprises.

Hello Peter, A masterful work which integrates many unique and lovely textures, as well as colorful dissonances. I especially liked the string quartet variation, which I thought was quite original of you to include. Although the piece remains in e minor for much of its duration(apart from the later variations), I feel there are so many distinguishing features in the compositional process that shift the focus away from modulation, and I must say that this is not easy to do(as a composer who relies too much on modulation). With this, you are building a really interesting, modal harmonic language. I also admire the way you've woven the different themes together to create a rich, dense texture. I do think it would be a nice contrast if we could have a clear melodic line/homophonic idea in order to introduce a specific theme. Hey.. its just an idea. But I am also surprised you're not using microtones in this piece because to me, its probably a part of your style at this point. 🥴