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Very beautiful and passionate. Why 2/1? In fact you subdivide it in parts as a 4/4. Well, you can write is as you like. But is less clear.

Emotional piece. I like it. It reminds me the style of nordic composers of our days (but without any dissonances, perhaps).

I enjoyed this! If possible, could you post the score (it'll help us comment on specifics)? I think you did well with beginning the process of thickening a texture. I think what might help improve this piece would be taking a dense texture and exploring ways to reduce it, then add to it, reduce it etc. Moreover, I think that experimenting more with less regular rhythmic configurations will break a bit of the monotony that can begin to develop; pushing a little further will make it feel less like an exercise. Overall, I think you did a good job!