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A litle tune I mixed, and added a bass line. Sin_Motivo.mp3

Thank you, I think you're absolutely right haha, there is definitely a loss of meaning around the midpoint. I think it was partly due to my improvisational inexperience. I'm really happy to hear you liked the harmonies though, I put most of my effort into harmony when writing. This was mostly just an amassed collection of riffs I had tried to connect together using improvisation. I tend to struggle to transition between motifs. Anyway, thanks again for your comment! 🙂

Hello and welcome to the forum! I feel like you create some really interesting harmonic progressions and some ostinati that bring lots of energy and drive but then at the midpoint of the piece it sounds like all that kind of fizzles out. If you ever decide to notate this and try to make it into a formal composition I'd suggest finding that midpoint (~2:40) and composing a more convincing transition into some kind of ending (the ending you have also kind of sounds like you just stopped at a certain point - it could easily have ended at 4:04 - that chord sounded pretty final but then you continued it). Thanks for sharing!

I like it. I don't mean to diminish it in any way by saying this, quite the opposite actually, but it reminds me of some of the Minecraft soundtrack songs. Creating something simple yet interesting is very hard. I loved the chords from 2:07 onward.

Beautiful piece! I like the fact in the second recording there is less vibrato. I think it fits the piece better. Both well done btw

One of these days you'll have to stop blatantly stealing others' music. If you ARE going to steal, make it a piece by someone obscure. Is it any wonder you're asking for ideas? You have none of your own and you aren't Rachmaninoff. Here's the piece you stole from. You just shifted it down a semitone. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YmSDDslA__M But... I relent. Here are a couple of totally original ideas for you. Maybe they can be added on: