September 10, 20169 yr Okay, so I'm going to set the remainder of this review under the guises that it's supposed to loop; in a perfect world, I would hope for more development; it's a too short of a loop in my opinion; but I can see the niche where this is a helpful thing to have in your portfolio. I like the range of dynamics and feelings you have even in a short amount of time. Sometimes tones clash, sometimes they work together, and it's motivic so it works out well. The mixing is a little weird... they aren't synched sometimes...? Or is that just me? I think it could be more desert-y, if you know what I mean. Maybe have a drone in one of the loops, or even just a really polytonal chord progression in whole notes in one of them. Just because it's a loop doesn't mean you can't explore some new things in them. Though short, I really do like the looped section; good job!
September 10, 20169 yr Author I'm thinking about expanding the loop and add some ambient string effects. I will also add a rattle snake sound to mix with the tune.
September 10, 20169 yr I like this. The dissonances are well managed. If you rework it... OK, but when there are too many effects, the essence of the music vanishes...
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