September 28, 20178 yr Hey everyone! Please let me introduce you my new composition which will be included on my debut album "Ballerina", coming out in October, it's called "Reminiscence" and I composed the main theme a couple of years ago, but It felt incomplete to me and so I added more pieces to the puzzle and I hope you'll like it!
September 29, 20178 yr The main chord progression is floaty and dreamy, I like it. Only thing I found a little awkward was use of Picardy Thirds in modulation. That was the only chord that felt a little out of left field. The juxtaposition with the B section is nice, though I'm not sure if the cross relations were intended. Sometimes they come off strange, but not all the time. I ask because in a piece with this title it could be totally intentional. The C section however felt a little less connected until its counterpart showed up. Makes it feel more like a transition rather than a section's antecedent. ALSO WHY DIDN'T YOU RESOLVE THE V7 CHORD at the end? Lol, it just irks me a little. Nice piece.
September 29, 20178 yr There are lots and lots of really beautiful moments in this piece, well done man. My critique would be: * Reverb is a bit OP, think it will be a bit smoother if it's tightened up just a tiny bit. * Also a small mid-eq wouldn't hurt. Of course not an unnatural amount, just a tiny curve. * At 4:18 there was a small weird ladder. * From The 4:30 mark I heard a different resolution and that made those following couple of seconds seem out of place. * In general I felt like there was too much change, I was looking for a constant - a sense of understanding where it's taking me. I felt like that structure was missing a bit. As if I had to too consciously follow in order to understand. * I agree with above comment, resolve it at the ending ;p - Peace Edited September 29, 20178 yr by benyamind
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