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[Orchestral] Chronicles of My Past

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String voicing in the beginning is a little weird. You start on an add2 chord, resolve to a 1st inversion chord, then continue to an open fourth. It's just a little non-continuous.
The chord progression in the next section was very nice.
The harp section was nice too, just a little bare. It was nice to hear some additions, but I think know what you were going for and it needs a little more. Light percussion could do wonders here.
I'm also finding it hard to understand your rhythm sometimes, especially in the main section.
The solo piano section could fix some voice leading since the way it is it's a little too centered on free counterpoint.
Good work overall!

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