April 30, 20187 yr It's very expressive, and your harmonies are great. At times it seems to lose its momentum, and you might want more of a contrasting section. Overall though, it's a great piece! Keep it up!
April 30, 20187 yr Interesting how you leave the waltz texture completely behind you in the middle section and create a more "contrapuntal" feeling (m. 53-120). You could spice up the piece by introducing dynamics; some melodic arcs really demand a more soft treatment. This could also provide the constrast @aMusicComposer mentioned without changing too much.
April 30, 20187 yr @YoungcNice work, imagine the final work how great will sound! Nice melodies & very possitive music !
April 30, 20187 yr I like the mixture of classic waltz and contrapuntal baroque... very nice! The makes the piece so modern.
April 30, 20187 yr Author 16 hours ago, aMusicComposer said: It's very expressive, and your harmonies are great. At times it seems to lose its momentum, and you might want more of a contrasting section. Overall though, it's a great piece! Keep it up! @aMusicComposer Can you tell me the specific spots? Thanks for the help!
May 1, 20187 yr Author 3 hours ago, aMusicComposer said: @Youngc It is mostly just before you reach a transition from one section to another. Thanks!
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