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Like descending structure, and the melody,   makes me think of being somewhat drunk, and the floor is starting to tilt, things on the wall, are starting to drip down like a Dali painting AND I'm a be melancholy.  It certainly evokes certain emotions..  I like your pieces, usually short, but very concise and to the point.  Well done. 

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I imagine a man sitting in a 50s diner late at night rain falling smoky room, with not a care "at all" as the melody descends chromatically (is that right?) I like how you allowed the bass to lead in the melody at times. And the percussion with the sixteenth notes just before the measure ends does give the feeling of someone nodding their head or trying to get up from a stupor and failing. I enjoyed this overall! Thank you for sharing!

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