rlf1301 Posted February 23, 2020 Share Posted February 23, 2020 It's a planet earth-y style orchestral piece. I've got my own theories, but fresh ears are always a huge plus! Don't hold back: 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Left Unexplained Posted February 23, 2020 Share Posted February 23, 2020 you have a great ear and a good sense of "what goes where". I don't see anything wrong with this! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rlf1301 Posted February 23, 2020 Author Share Posted February 23, 2020 3 hours ago, Left Unexplained said: you have a great ear and a good sense of "what goes where". I don't see anything wrong with this! Thanks for the kind words. I wasn't sure if the sections played well off each other but I'm pleased that the track holds up - after too many plays it gets hard to tell! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ken320 Posted February 24, 2020 Share Posted February 24, 2020 Nothing's wrong with it, but if I had to nit pick I'd say that the rhythm section should be more involved, more elaborate, more continuous. And also I think it's a tad to loud, recording wise. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rlf1301 Posted February 24, 2020 Author Share Posted February 24, 2020 20 hours ago, Ken320 said: Nothing's wrong with it, but if I had to nit pick I'd say that the rhythm section should be more involved, more elaborate, more continuous. And also I think it's a tad to loud, recording wise. I agree, the rhythm section is a bit lacklustre. Definitely something I need to work on in future pieces. Thanks for the tips. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ken320 Posted February 25, 2020 Share Posted February 25, 2020 It's very good nonetheless. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jean Szulc Posted March 16, 2020 Share Posted March 16, 2020 That's very well-produced. Seriously, it's just a great job. I also don't know why this topic is named "What's wrong with this piece", as I don't see anything that could really be called a problem. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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