14 hours ago14 hr helloooo"The Voyage of a Lone Ship" is a piece for mixed quintet (violin, cello, horn, timpani, and piano). it is based on a sketch from the website youraislopbores.me*. i've asked a random person to draw a landscape for me to base my composition on and what i got is this sketch of a lone ship sailing on the sea under a starry night. the piece contains many different aspects that i try to portray: the lone night voyage, the shimmering star, the creaking wooden ship, the wavy sea, the exciting morning conundrum, and the night fall once more.*of note, youraislopbores.me is a website where real people can roleplay as an ai and answer/draw prompts from humans. people can also be the role of the humans and give the "ai(s)" (people who's roleplaying as ai(s)) many kinds of prompts. therefore, this artwork is not made by ai. a real anonymous person sketched my prompt and created the artwork below. this website is an act against ai art in general.im going to be honest, composing this piece was a tough journey. i had to rewrote the early sections so many times and my motivation keeps dwindling down day by day to finish this, but ive pulled through!!! i'd say there are many things that i'm not entirely satisfied with the piece, but it's in a good enough condition for me to post. also mightve gone overboard with the duration, oh well lmaoenjoy the piece guysss The Voyage of a Lone Ship.mp3 The Voyage of A Lone Ship.pdf Edited 10 hours ago10 hr by ferrum.wav
9 hours ago9 hr Entry: The voyage of the sunken ship. Melodies Themes MotivesHarmony Chords TexturesForm Development Structure TimeOriginality CreativityScore PresentationInstrumentation Orchestration PlayabilityExecution of Given ChallengeTaste7771010628Average Score:7.12Review:Execution: One of the requirements is write a piece with in 3-7 minutes. This was 9 minutes. The overall aura of this piece is mixed. At times, it gave off eerie mood then it didn't? Score Presentation: The score was readable and there were no engraving errors. Instrumentation: The imbalance between the strings and horns is problematic. You could not horn at all! Watch out for those stops in the string part. Make sure they are playable! Creativity: Yes, this a creative piece. The over structure and form of the piece is hard to determine. I am not sure if it is sonata, or scherzo, or something else...In general, I would want to see him grow as writer and see more of his works. He has the potential! I love what he did here.
5 hours ago5 hr Melodies Themes MotivesHarmony Chords TexturesForm Development Structure TimeOriginality CreativityScore PresentationInstrumentation Orchestration PlayabilityExecution of Given ChallengeTaste797109.5758Average Score: 7.8Review:This is a very creative piece, starting with the painting (which I love) and the concept. I’m not sure the music in particular evokes that for me, but it’s so subjective...It’s true that the piece goes beyond what was supposedly the challenge.The combination of instruments is original. I think the French horn works well in this ensemble because it has such a powerful projection. Although with virtual instruments, it’s sometimes easy to alter how it would actually sound.There’s a strange shift in style, but I like it. It reminds me of a contemporary opera written in a non-tonal language where, suddenly, everything sounds like jazz.The score is very good, though is there a reason why the piano is printed in a larger font?I also have doubts about those multiple stops, even with techniques like con legno.
1 hour ago1 hr 8 hours ago, Kvothe said:Entry: The voyage of the sunken ship.I didn't know the ship sank
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