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I never seen in fugue written 10 in Lydian. Not until now. The entries of the subject and counter subject in the exposition are done wonderfully. I see no counter point issues. Counter point is one of the hardest things to master once we go through the basics..and fugue writing is excellent way to master that. Those tritones between voices (C nat and B#) are hard to avoid in Lydian mode. But, I think you can figure it out. Do not stop. Keep writing.

I agree with Henry that at least some of those C-naturals should be B-sharps, but really, this is wonderful. Almost mesmerizing. By all means, keep going!

And for my 4th and final submission to the event:

This time I have mixed "O, Christmas Tree" with "Hark! The Herald Angel's Sing!" I included three stanzas of each Carol and each occurrence of each stanza is set differently with the final one being a bit polytonal. Also, this time the mash-up is accompanied by a brass octet instead of strings. And the choir is a SMAATTBB 8-part choir. Thanks for listening and I hope you had a Merry Christmas and that your New Year will be a happy one! I'd appreciate any comments, suggestions, critiques or observations!

Thank you all for listening. The fact that some notes have stems and others do not is to differentiate, within the tintinnabuli technique, between the two types of voices: the melodic voice and the tintinnabuli (or supporting) voices. The truth is that this technique can be taken to very complex levels. I really like it and studied Pärt in some depth.

Hello Wieland, thank you truly for this and happy new year to you. 🥳 I did title the song "bittersweet" but doubted if it fit that title well. After hearing your advice, I think I will definitely keep the name, since it is tinged with a few sad harmonies. glad to hear that I came at the right time(and not just "procrastinating" you see) but I have to apologize about the abrupt splicing of the recordings; I was trying to prepare my materials before going on this family trip, where a real piano will not be available. Anyhow, I am glad I got my submission in on time.

happy new year 🥳

What a charming, if somewhat sad song! Maybe its a fortune that you posted your submission „so late“, since its melancholic mood perfectly fits the imagination of the last piece performed on a party or the piano player is playing his ultimate song while the last guests are leaving the restaurant. I suspect that it is a live-recording. If so, congratulations to that beautiful performance and a happy New Year.

Here is @Mooravioli's submission!

Happy New Year to Hongkong, @Henry Ng Tsz Kiu! Since I was busy with the 2025 Christmas Event over the past few weeks, I haven’t had enough time to continue that piece – and therefore apologies for my silence – I think I will get back to this fugue in the new year. Thanks for the advice concerning C natural vs. B sharp – haha, your C-sharp-minor-biased eyes are looking forward those things instantly. I will check it out thoroughly.

Thanks so much for listening Henry! Glad you liked it 🤗

Yo you can post the piece individually and then link the post here!

seems like i am the last to get my submission in; it's not too late right? since it's 7:14pm,the 31st on my clock. I unfortunately left my score at home(it was handwritten)

Hi @elmarad40! I think this piece really shows the fury of Gods to me. I like the tremolos you use throughout the piece ( it can be written in tremolo sign though), and the brass passages are solemn. Maybe more woodwind passages can be added between those strings and brass sections. Thx for sharing. Henry

Hi @muchen_! I like that you use Baroque tuning in the Recitativo Accompagnato and Aria (also the 8-bit sound haha). It definitely is in late Baroque style esp. with the melisma in the Aria. Thx for sharing! Henry

Hi @gaspard! Juicy English flavour harmonies and ornamentations in these 3 Saltarellos! I enjoy all of them and no way can I tell which one do I hate the least lol! One thing I hate... you should be more confident on yourself! Thx for sharing! Henry

Hi @Uhor! I love this piece! It gives an antique feeling but the language is modern, just like Vaughn Williams's approach. I like in 2:21 you reach that calm and really sacred passage (the chant?). The violin melody in 2:39 is really touching. Normally I would feel bored by the brass passage but the one in 3:54 doesn't bore me at all, because there is real solemnity here. What I think of is maybe you can add an organ here till the end as well. I enjoy the ending too. No one is "too old" for our forum! As long as we keep learning and progressing no one is old. This forum is for anyone who is willing to mutually communicate on each other's music. Only those who stop learning and consider themselves the best are old. You can continuously submit pieces to our forum! Thx for sharing! Henry

Hi @Some Guy That writes Music! I like that you use the opening passage as hooking passages, and then use that motive of 2nd as the main motive for the last piece, just like the structure of "Pictures at the Exhibition". I enjoy the change of style in the pieces and the 1st one is my favourite, as I love the imitation which portrays the chasing of children. (Just like the original meaning of "Fugue".) Thx for sharing! Henry

Hi @Alex Weidmann! Indeed the harmony creates unexpected effect. I like the modulations throughout. At b.56 when you move to E flat major I thought you were using the clichetic "up an semitone" modulation just like many boring pop songs do, but you prove me wrong haha. I don't think it sparse, especially when played in real life it will be full of pedals and the texture would not be thick at all. Only the scoring would be a bit confusing, I think you can simply write those arpeggios out in 32th notes and then have a pedal under it. This will create the same effect and without the arpeggio signs haha. Thx for sharing! Henry

thank you so much for the compliments everyone!

Hi @Cafebabe! I like that you are using the French Overture format for the Oratorio with a slow, dotted passage for the A section and then a fugal fast section after it. I think you can fully extend the A section first by making it in Binary structure, instead of just an 8 bar passage. For the fugal passage of course you can extend it to a full fugue. I like the walking rhythm of the 2nd movement. The melody is nice, and probably you can extend the movement by turning it to a ternary Aria. Beware of the parallel 5th in b.4 of Ab-Eb to G-D. Thx for sharing! Henry

Hi @Tunndy! I think you have done a lot of good stuff here. I like the 2 bar accompaniment pick up at the beginning, the main melody with nice pizzicato accompaniment, that wind tutti chord in b.10 and later b.18 to end the piece, using of horns to soothe the vioin theme in b.11, and the nice flute countermelody in b.15. Maybe the only less agreed thing for me is the use of bassoon. In the whole piece where the bassoon appears, it is playing its high register which will be more stressed in timbre and rather unmatch with the relaxed feeling of the piece. If you really want to have those notes with a similiar timbre, you can use a cor anglais which is also a double reed instrument. Second thing of course is that you can extend the piece haha. P.S. I definitely think this piece can be put into our Christmas Event (although the deadline is January the 1st, 2026 haha!) Thx for sharing!

Hi @mercurypickles! The first one does portrait the dreamy mood with a less firming rhythm of tied triplets, it reminds me how Schumann treat the subject. For the second piece, the thing I like the most is how you treat Ab/G#, play with its ambiguity and put it in F minor/E major, have it resolve till the very end of the work. Thx for sharing! Henry

Hi @张文灏! This piece reminds me of how tasty a congee is lol! But I would rather not having a medicated congee, since it means I'm sick! Nice singing and arrangement of the song, thx for sharing! Henry

Hello @raymond doerr! I like your use of chimes throughout the piece. Starting from a more joyous A major and end on a calmer F major well fits the Christmas theme. Like @Wieland Handke mentioned I like the pizzicato strings at the end of the piece. Thx for joining the event and welcome to our forum! Henry