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Thank you for the review. I definitely will revisit those E's and I may change the accent.

Hello everone 🙂 My first post here is part one of larger composition I am currently working on. The composition is called The Great Lighthouse and is inspired by Christopher Paolini's book Fractal Noise. Part one is written in largo - A minor and is called Discovery. Please enjoy and any feedback would be appreciated 🙂 Musescore: https://musescore.com/user/60829534/scores/32485457

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In modern staff positioning, the choir is above the orchestra. Alo, put phrase markings on the woodwinds. Your recording is playing it legato but they won't read it that way. Also, in real time, reading one line(alto) in the choir with flats and sharps like that is a huge cognitive dissonance Since it is descending, make that G# Ab. You are already showing Db or Gb in that phrase. That augmented 2nd is the devil in the Soprano part. Make that Eb instead of D#. Gb is cool, F# is the bane of our existence. OF COURSE, we can read in F# major, but no wants to. Gb is better. Lastly, you can break the rule in the last measure. Instead of having the mezzos go higher,swap with the sopranos. Love the piece.

There's some great stuff here. I urge you to listen to the aforementioned. There is GREAT advice given!

I thought I'd share this short prelude I started last year and finished soon after (which I originally intended to use for Valentines' Day this year, but alas...). I haven't been writing much new stuff and am currently working on fixing up a few of my older compositions so this was one of the few things I did manage to conjure up in the past few months. I hope it's listenable? (as for playability, arpeggiating large chords is a must, haha)

I reckon the work invokes a certain warm and inviting mood that I seem to put down at least in part to the harmony, which isn't overcomplicated and at the same time not just simple triads. I, for one, love the descending material in bar 11! The rocking syncopation I also find to be pleasing and gives the piece a little bit of movement lest it become a little stagnant. Cycling some of the thematic material to the left hand from bar 20 is a nice touch. This is completely based on taste, but one thing that perhaps I'm not fully convinced by is the pedal E, occasionally accented, in bars 24-31 in the right hand; it, to me, seems to lend that section a leaden quality that strays somewhat from the generally contemplative atmosphere of the other sections? Apart from that, I did enjoy this work quite so. Writing music for other people is always somewhat daunting for me but I think it's really quite a nice thing to do, and compositions I find serve rather well as gifts. I hope your daughter liked it!

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What I feel like would be a better version is if you made this a canon. Then to end it you end with that starting theme.

A beautiful piece. It doesn't seem very complex, but it's very well structured (which, for me, is one of the biggest challenges). And the dynamic control is exquisite.

Things added - drums- riser at start- bass near end part- added instruments for beat drop- anyway, here it is:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7x7rf-YpS7E&list=PLiE7K7q7K-Uv6JjIVF5EUzVzvZQ2YrXIP&index=41 Audio-score

this piece was composed with me hearing absolotly nothing while in the making of it, I wanted to see how well can I make pieces like that. yipieeee.mp3 wadanada.pdf

So very Nice to see even Admin, contribute Content, with such a High Degree of Contemporary Quality.

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I have just updated the post - up to 13 themes now!!!

Good for you! I'm too embarrassed to share my earlier works lol

Here's a very short piano composition I composed for my daughter many years ago. Nothing extravagant .... simple theme and tone. Mark

Thanks for the comment! I’m sure there could be plenty of changes to do, however, this work was one of my earlier attempts at writing for the orchestra. A time before I got any composition feedback from any mentors. I thankfully won a competition and spent a week working with composer Robert Bradshaw. During that time, he gave me tips on voicing, orchestration, and understanding tessitura. My rewrite was not to completely redo the work but polish it with the new information and techniques I learned. So, while I appreciate the feedback, I will not be rewriting certain spots in the work as I still want to keep it as is to show my growth overtime.

What can you do with 3 notes then?

This is a very well constructed piece! I think it's a little too on the "safe" side. When I envision a piece about storms (be it Vivaldi's Summer, Beethoven's 6th, Alpine Symphony), I want to hear rapid scales (especially in the strings and woodwinds), wild tremolo in the strings & percussion, and more dissonant chords in the brass. Maybe I'm biased after listening to those pieces. I think the D major section (starting around 94) is too similar in terms of orchestration as the beginning. I think this should be more brighter sounding, maybe with some instruments playing an octave higher than written (for example violins/violas in 126). In general, a little variety would help differentiate this section.

@Wieland Handke Apologies, I didn't think anyone would be interested in seeing the score. In any case, here it is.

A very short thought, or a bubble. A fleeting moment. Built around a Csus2/F# to Cmaj9(add13). That's it. Just a moment. Just this evening. Love me some lydian and b9 and #7 sounds. Acoustic guitar, DADGAD capo 7. 🔹 Quarter-to.mp3

I agree with most of the comments above...that is a LOT of instruments! Even if you're trying to emulate Mahler's 6th Symphony (which clearly you are with the choice of key and title of the movement), Mahler shows restraint on how he orchestrates. The big loud moments when all the instruments play together is rare, and is used for an effect rather than just bombast. In the current state, this sounds more like a background score to a film, rather than a symphonic movement. @Sojar Voglar pretty much sums it up. There needs to be direction, a form, and something to keep people's attention.

@therealAJGS WOW! What an improvement! It is night and day. I have no comments on the music as again, I do not know much on what is meant to accompany, but it definitely conveys something dire or thrilling. As a point of enjoyment, I must say there feels like too much distortion in the file. Just about 30 seconds worth of a blurriness that is very overwhelming compared to the literal music. For me, it took my attention away... especially with headphones 😓