Prelude in C sharp minor

Hello artists!

I'd be very glad to show you  a bit piano piece I did some years ago 

Of course, any comment or suggestion, you will be welcome

Very romantic!

In my opinion, this piece is lovely. 
I hear many influences of many romantic piano composers.
The melodies are very nice I like how you develop them by taking small motives and alter these.
You play extremely well too! I love your sound.
Well done!

Welcome to the forum by the way! Feel free to review others' works as well.

Thank you very much Maarten for you good comment!!

Very beautiful...full of feelings and poweful at the same time...could I see the score? Great job!

Thanks mery much ferdi I really apreciate your comment!!  I upload here a document I did some time ago, nevertheless, I should do a milion of improvements, but I thing you will be able to make an idea

Me parece una música maravillosa, cuidada y bien hecha, e inspirada.

On 17/9/2017 at 1:53 AM, ilv said:

I can't seem to find the music. Could be a problem on my end, but I don't know.

 

ilv, the score is in pdf, I think  is the last work of the booklet

7 hours ago, Luis Hernández said:

Me parece una música maravillosa, cuidada y bien hecha, e inspirada.

 

Muchas gracias Luis,  que genial es encontrar por aquí, gente de habla hispana! ¡Saludos desde Barcelona!!

Nice effort- and brilliant, professional piano playing! The composition is in a typical Rachmaninoff-style.  I have only one comment.  I would suggest a bit more melodic variation/modulation (maybe in some of the slower sections). In my opinion, there is too much C# minor repetition all the time, which for my ears, becomes a bit monotonous after a while.  

Thank you Panta rei, Maybe you are right, Always I have the tendence to explode an only tonality, and no modulate, until I've satisfied myself of this tonality

Peça maravilhosa, Josep. Cheia de força interior. Parabéns! Gostei imenso de a ouvir. Escusado será dizer que a tocas de forma excelente.

Amazing. I think you are the best composer (not worldwide famous) that I have found in the internet, with big difference with the others.

Aquí otro de habla hispana :)

Felicitaciones.

Muchisimas gracias Mariza Cabral, y Donethur! your comments, fill my heart with strenght to compose again! in some weeks, I will upload new videos from new compositions!!

 Saludos Donethur desde Barcelona!