Corridor (Horror Game OST)

Greetings.

I'm currently work on soundtracks for a survival horror video game (probably the first Iranian game in this genre!), and in the game, there's a corridor, and I composed this piece for the corridor scene. Please let me know your opinion.

Thanks.

37 minutes ago, ilv said:

There's a thread in the "Advice and Techniques" forum that might be an interesting read if you're having trouble completing your pieces.

Thanks, but which topic? I checked that sub-forum.

I like it. It definitely has an intense and anxious feeling. 

First off, I would like to say that an "Iranian" horror game is a unique and a very interesting idea that I would love to play! I've never heard of that before.

Now, for your piece, it sounded very spooky especially at the initial start where the guy is breathing, I like that. It did sound a bit incomplete, however, if this was meant to loop in the game then the ending is fine. 

Good job!

On 10/23/2017 at 3:33 AM, Sepharite said:

I like it. It definitely has an intense and anxious feeling. 

Yes, this is what the song is made to be :D

On 10/23/2017 at 4:24 AM, LostSamurai said:

I would like to say that an "Iranian" horror game is a unique and a very interesting idea that I would love to play!

Of course, this is not the first Iranian horror game, but it can be the best.

On 10/23/2017 at 4:24 AM, LostSamurai said:

it sounded very spooky especially at the initial start where the guy is breathing,

Yes, I really wanted to add some scary and creepy atmospheres, and then I picked my microphone and started breathing :))

On 10/23/2017 at 4:24 AM, LostSamurai said:

if this was meant to loop in the game then the ending is fine. 

Not really, the corridor in the game has the feel of "being incomplete", so we'll use it only one time.

Honestly, I hate horror. 
I am not stand-up against the darkness and fear that I get. 

However, I cannot say that I hate this music. It gives me an awkward feeling and the mysterious atmosphere is inventive.
On the one hand, I would have liked to see the scene to look if the music fits the scene. On the other hand, I am glad you did not post the scene, because I would then get nightmares. Hahaha!

Nevertheless, well done!

I also like it, and the open feeling in the ending is very nice. For me it's not incomplete. Something is complete when one takes that decision. 

3 hours ago, Maarten Bauer said:

It gives me an awkward feeling and the mysterious atmosphere is inventive.

Can you explain your feelings?

3 hours ago, Maarten Bauer said:

, I would have liked to see the scene to look if the music fits the scene

Imagine a house in Iran (in 1940-1960's) which is designed by a British man, a middle-eastern and victorian design. This is the design of corridor.

2 hours ago, Luis Hernández said:

I also like it, and the open feeling in the ending is very nice. For me it's not incomplete. Something is complete when one takes that decision. 

Thanks!

8 hours ago, Muhammadreza said:

Can you explain your feelings?

My emotions when hearing the music are:

Fear; death; awkwardness.