i cannot forget

I came across this poem "I Cannot Forget" about the experience of Jewish people in WWII, and thought it was intriguing so I set it to music. Just a short project. 

Very beautiful. Delicate and evocative.

I have some doubts about notation here and there. 4/4+1/8  is for the distribution in the left hand, but is mor important the right hand, istn't it? Also,  I would have distributed the notes in bars 7-8-9 in a different way. Anyway, I don't think there is only one possible notation. 

The music is very nice.

Hi @Monarcheon 

Emotional & kind music. Yes, you have done very nice work, thats my minimal opinion, i have no words 🙂

Edited April 27, 20187 yr by Ampnoe's

Hi Monarcheon. What program did you use to create the music?

@Luis Hernández and @Ampnoe's, thank you so much! This is going to be a movement in my piano suite "Night Music".
@Youngc, Finale 25, the new version.

Hi again @Monarcheon Piano suite!?  Many of us will stay tuned & me as well!  Wish you the Best Inspiration Ever!!! 🙂

Edited April 28, 20187 yr by Ampnoe's

Yes! this is very beautiful, a suite would be wonderful!

Awesome writing, very successful idea and execution!

Woot woot :)

Gustav Johnson