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I always wanted to make something electronic, but I'm pretty bad at it so, here's a sketch of a "piece"(?) that is mostly electronic. Just audio because, is hard to write a sheet of this. is not finished

Btw it is a 6/8, and if it helps, the progresion is Im, IIIb, VIb, V in C minor.

Any comment is apreciated :3

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hmm, not too bad. i would probably suggest some dynamics in volume for little percussive bits like the hats, especially near the beginning.

interesting style for 0:25 onwards, but i do like what you did with the bass at around moments like 0:17.

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maybe add a synth wobble with some reverb high in the register to compliment the hi hats. Also I think it could use better sound design, I don't know what synth you are using but most of them have filters you can automate. It's a catchy tune but that's only half the battle in electronic music

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15 minutes ago, Left Unexplained said:

Also I think it could use better sound design

 

Besides that, I think the harmonies get quite repetitive. I think a lot of people write electronic music only thinking about loops, but it's much more than that. Try thinking about it as more of a flow than a bunch of looped ideas grouped together.

The melody around 0:30 is very well-written and catchy, congratulations on that.

 

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Pretty good, especially for a first try. I'm no electronic composer, but I felt that the hi hats dominated a bit too much. Also, I felt that you could do with some more bass - either another layer or turning up the bass in the mix.

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