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This is for quintet not orchestra, right

Thank you for taking the time to listen to my piece. I would love to hear more of your feedback when you get a chance. Thanks again!

Hello A few weeks ago, I was discussing the characteristic features of the 20th-century neoclassical style. I wrote a short minuet incorporating these features. A playful style, based on the 18th-century minuet dance, with broken accents, clean lines, bitonality, unexpected modulations... MINUETO_luis.mp3 MINUETO_luis.pdf

This was originally called four by a competition on a different discord server a few months back, but I will send this over here to see what other feedback I can get this piece was a team activity as that you had teams throughout three different rounds and this happened to be the first round, but also happened was that all my teammates did not contribute anything so technically, I was the only one to credit myself. Anyways, provided down below is the seiklios epitaph this is a very ancient piece of written music and by scholars was to be thought of the first written piece of music in the first composition the prompt said to write a prelude of five minutes, but given the opportunity, I made it a theme in variations, however, though it could still function as a prelude since prelude really means a opener or something that comes before something else meaning that this would make a great opener for a piano concert or for something to study It turns out I can't really put the image in here without extra work, but the one thing I had realized is that the theme is the first thing to be played quite literally without any variation Variations on an ancient song.mp3 Variations on an ancient song.pdf

Bro you should check out my Paganini Variations seriously. Also I might try 😉.

Thank you so much, my friend, for taking the time to listen to my Sonata and for sharing such beautiful and thoughtful words. I’m truly happy that my music gave you something meaningful and that the Sonata was able to bring you these feelings. That means a lot to me. ❤️

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Hello Markus, Thanks for sharing! It’s funny how this video also showed up in my feed yesterday! I guess that’s just how the algorithm works. The AI fugue is in fact pretty good—it’s way superior to others I’ve heard concocted by AI. For some reason, AI music fails to interest me, as well as AI literature/poetry. Perhaps that’s because I’m as interested in the human element and how life is translated, through the messiness of the creative process, into art. AI music seems to me like a regression, because it’s distanced another step from human consciousness, from those sacred limitations, needs, and inefficiencies that constitute humanity. So even if AI could create art technically at the level of Beethoven or Bach, I would personally remain unconvinced. It’s kind of like receiving a love letter, and learning that it was written by ChatGPT. It’s so disappointing. It’s just so… shallow. Some things are best left to the humans, regardless of technical capability—that’s just my two cents!

In this video, we explore how to use unison and octave doublings when orchestrating a melody. You will learn how doubling a melody with different orchestral instruments can change its color, strength, character, and expression. We will explore different combinations of strings, woodwinds, and brass, and examine how instruments can be combined in unison and at the octave to create a richer, more powerful, and balanced orchestral sound. Free Download the PDF file: https://asgarzademusicschool.com/blog/orchestration-techniques-unison-and-octave-doublings-of-the-melody

I agree with @Lithl that this is a piece that would really excel if performed in a noisy and crowded bar! It feels improvisational, and yet has very noticeable form. Clearly you put a lot of thought into this. The combo of improvisational sounds mixed with a crisp form and clearly thought-out main theme all combines to make this music really pop! I’m excited to check out the other preludes. Nice work!

That was a refreshing and magical piece. It does have that late baroque feel in its rhythm, but not as much in its harmony. I haven’t done an analysis of it, but just to my ear it has a modern quality. I think you make choices that Scarlatti would not have made harmony wise, and that makes this music sound very fresh, not at all like an impersonation of another composer’s style. This feels less like a sonata and more like a piece that could be part of a suite. Well done!

'고난주간을 위한 신성가곡2' for Soprano and Orchestra.mp3 고난주간을 위한 신성가곡2 for Soprano and Orchrestra 가시관이 깊이 박혀 그의 이마를 뚫고 채찍에 살이 찢겨 뼈가 드러나니 오직 주님 만을 온전히 섬겨 살게 하시옵소서. 못이 손과 발을 뚫어 박히는그아픔 그 창에 찔려 피와 물이 흐르고 질식하며 숨쉬다가 돌아가신 주여 받으신 그 고난 모두 내 죄때문이었네 죄를 반복하지 않고 오직 주만 따르리니. 주의 은혜로 이 죄인을 용서하소서. 내 허물이 주님 등에 채찍질하고 내 죄악이 주님의 손발에 못박았네 고통속에 피 흘리신 주님의 사랑 뼈마디 어긋나는 고통 견디시며 하늘을 우러러 기도하시다 숨거두신... 주여 온몸상하시고 찢기신그모습 무릎꿇고 회개 하오니 죄인 용서하소서 오직 주님만을 온전히 섬겨 살게 하시옵 소서. 주의 은혜로 이 죄인 주꼐 바칩니다. Geistliches Lied II A crown of thorns pierced deep into His brow; The cruel scourge laid bare His flesh and bone. Grant that I may serve You, Lord alone, And live for You alone. The nails that pierced His hands and feet in pain; The spear that brought forth blood and water there. Lord, who breathed Your final breath in anguish, Every grief You bore was mine to bear. No more shall I return to paths of sin; By grace forgive this soul within. My every fault became the cruel lash; My every sin drove nails into Your hands. Yet through Your bleeding love amid such suffering, You bore the pain no heart could understand. With eyes raised up in prayer unto the Father, You gave Your final breath. O Lord, Your wounded, torn, and broken body; On bended knees I now repent and pray. Grant that I may serve You, Lord alone, And walk Your holy way.

Ok, since I did not post very well last time I am re-posting this. I made some changes to the piece and mp3 and am going to post the inspiration for this piece here: This is a piece adapted from my piano composition. I thought it needed more harmonies and motifs. It is inspired by any beloved person who lived a full life and died, and how others reflect on that life, sometimes with complex grief, sometimes with euphoric joy and hope. I picture the intro and coda as the sadness of the death, and the middle section as the whole of their life, mostly the good parts mixed with the bad memories, and the complexities of the grief people feel. Basically, it is the emotions in the life of a person and the emotions the grievers have when reflecting on the life. Woodwind Quartet.mp3 A Life Lived Woodwind Quartet Original Piece.pdf

I’m a big fan of this! You found that blend of dissonance mixed with traditional harmony that really does the trick. I admire your use of rhythm in the melody, and how it works in unison with the harmonic changes. Your piece does not feel like it’s trying too hard to be modern, but instead uses a bit of modern sound to express something poetic, while still maintaining a clean and apparent form. That’s the sweet spot! I would like to see a whole second part added on. The repeat of the waltz is great, but it makes my ear excited for part 2, just as a classical waltz might have part 1 and part 2, both with their own repeat signs. If you can develop these themes into a part 2, I think you’d really have a complete waltz. But even if you don’t, it’s still fine to listen to. Cheers!

@Grant Weep Thank you so very much, not only for your thoughtful feedback but also for taking the time to give this piece multiple listens. I agree that it throws a lot at the listener, and I also agree that it improves if you listen a few times. Often with pieces like this it can be tough to pick out the form on the first listen, and that can make it sound like a big pile of chaos. But once you start to pick out the main themes and the variations in those themes, the piece develops much more coherence. The fast pace and frenetic nature are intentional here. I wanted it to feel like it was racing at you. Thank you for giving this music your time. I do wish a real human pianist would play it. Though I can play piano, I am by no means a concert pianist. And frankly my interests lie much more in the composition space than the performance space. So I just don’t dedicate the time to practicing playing, but instead spend time practicing writing music. Therefore, I write music that I can’t play well. I wish I had more drive to practice performance, but it just isn’t my sweet spot. To answer your question, I compose a bit at the keyboard, but mostly I like to compose right into notation software. It allows me to try all kinds of iterations on the fly, though composing at the piano is also lovely, and sometimes much more free. Both techniques are part of the process. Thank you again for engaging with this! I will return the favor with your pieces!

You started composing when you were 6???? Also we're about the same age I'm 11

Hi @jejrekmek, This improvisation has a bluesy, jazzy, and avant-garde atmosphere. Also, those are nice chords. However, probably because of your creative outburst, this sounds unintentionally messy. Not gonna lie, in my personal opinion, I don't care which was intended or not, whether I find it interesting or like it. In that regard, I think your improvisation sounds nice and has an interesting style. If you remember how to play it, writing a piece based on the piano is going to be good. Finally, you listen to C418!? That's cool. I imagine then you like Aphex Twin, don't you? I actually love Messiaen so much, therefore our music tastes resonate a bit. Anyway, keep doing your style! Best, Lithl.

Thanks, Markus. This is certainly a hot topic right now. Astra is apparently phenomenal at things like mathematics, too, so it seems they’ve created something truly impressive. I was quite surprised when I listened to this piece; honestly, it surpasses some human composers. I believe that at this rate, AI will eventually reach a level indistinguishable from humans in certain respects. That said, for the time being—especially regarding counterpoint—humans still reign supreme, though AI’s pattern recognition capabilities are extraordinary. Pattern recognition isn't everything, of course, but for us humans, the structures and chord progressions of the music we’ve heard play a crucial role. For tasks with a defined "correct" answer, I think AI might soon match or even outperform humans. I think the real challenge lies in creating something truly new and creative. If AI development can successfully integrate with brain research on creativity, AI music might transcend mere industry and become a form of art in its own right. Of course, the future is uncertain, but it will be fascinating to see how things unfold. Best, Lithl.

I listened to it yesterday, so I really don’t remember much but it’s a really good piece if I’m able to I’ll probably give some ideas, but it’s sort of follows that post classical style where it’s sort of follows and borrows from the role of functional harmony and kind of like that idea, but kind of is meant to be more of as a flavor than an actual structural framework

Stumbled across this video tonight. AI’s version is actually far better than I had expected. In that respect, I’m impressed. But it is soulless, bringing to mind the first movement to Goreki’s symphony no 3, in which he puts to music the cold, banal and machinations of the Third Reich. It also goes without saying the human fugue is first rate. Eager to hear other people’s thoughts.

thank you! I had already decided where the improv would begin and end, the differences are how i depart from the beginning and arrive to the ending There were a few things i did in take 1 that i liked so i repeated in take 2, but all the differences between the two were improvisations since I'm not an extremely skilled improvisor there is still a buffer between idea and execution, things that i would probably do differently if it were a composition (the 'wrong' notes) ; so it was mostly just about translating ideas and emotion in real time no matter how how 'good' it sounded The thing i played at 0:32 of take 2 was basically the melody of wet hands from minecraft.. but with major seventh dissonances a couple octaves up, an effect i got from messiaen's la colombe

Really thanks for your considerable feedback.

This is very beautiful music, I do have to say. Thanks greatly for sharing it with us. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ One thing I will caution is: be careful that you don't treat the Viola as a 'failed Violin'. Throughout the entire composition, I already got that a Violin III and IV can basically substitute for Viola I and II. The only two measures that (barely) kept this from happening is meas. 35-36 (Meas. 35+37 for Viola II), where Violas only visit F3 and F#3 pitches right below Open-G; and then ever goes down to an E3 ONE time throughout the entire movement. The C-string never gets visited again. Furthermore, the motif's/phrases containing these quick, evanescent C-String usages could easily be taken 8va. Once that is done, Viola... er... Voila! You got yourself a Violin III and Violin IV line. (Similarly, I caution choral composers to remember that an Alto is not the lack of a Soprano voice. Altos have their own meaningful and useful range and rich intonation. Many to most Altos may have accepted their 'lazy' Soprano-supporter's role; where all women share the exact same lowest note in the composition, which is either middle-C or a few semitones below, while Sopranos' highest pitch sores a P4 to as much as an 8v above Altos' highest pitch. This may be a choral issue, but I think it absolutely bares relevant mentioning here; seeing the parallel drawn that often makes this a shared concern between the vocal and string world.) (Also, regarding taking up the few F's and E 8va, I get the counter-argument that this may potentially muddy the meaningful motions of your intended counterpoint. This muddying, as I observe, is fairly minimum and mostly unnoticeable. And, the motions that may result in hypothetically putting these up 8va have already been noted in other locations in the score; perhaps as little as just a few beats later.) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This doesn't take away from the lush and organic contours you used; I meant it fully and transparently when I say this is beautiful music that I relate to nicely. Still, this was one concern that completely jutted out to me.

How's it happening, YoungComposers community, Would you all like to casually take note of all the potential historic inaccuracies of this suite's movement? 😁 (I have two.) Jubilant Hall for the Dance of the Giants (composition) - Sonata in G for Alto Piano Trio - Movement I - Evening's Entrance.mp3 3-movement Alto Piano Trio Suite in G - Jubilant Hall for the Dance of the Giants - Movement I - Evening's Entrance (Sonata-Allegro).pdf

Hello I agree about the glockenspiel – it’s very, very piercing. So it should be reserved for moments of great brilliance or when the whole orchestra is playing at full volume. Or used very sparingly. But there’s one thing I’d like to mention. And that is that, for me, using a set of notes like this isn’t limiting at all. The possibilities offered by using something like this are limitless. It’s simply a framework to build upon, just like a major or minor mode, or a thousand other things.