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hello guys this is my new song i hope you like it! any criticism is welcome.

The second movement of my piano concerto, I wrote it during the lockdown and I feel like it exemplifies my mood throughout. I'm particularly pleased with the brief piu mosso section. I wanted to upload it with note performer, although I currently don't have my finances in order. so I didn't, if I get it soon I'll re-upload it. Please let me know your thoughts, and I'm working on the final movement, as I'm not short on time.!

Here an Scherzo I wrote in early Classic style with ABA form.

Pretty elegant and well proper-styled

Considering the transitions, most parts are near impossible. Considering it alone, most of the double notes can be played, but as the monarcheon says, you have to calculate the position transitions. an example that cannot be played at all: you cannot play a3 and e5 at the same time, the violin cannot reached three string at the same time, chords are obtained with a fast resonance.You can add different melodies between chords, but this is very difficult, bach's chaconné is a good example. The second parts of bach's violin sonatas are fuga, check them out. I also recommend that you study the entire partita and its sonata to understand the polyphony in the violin. Sorry for my bad english, I hope it helped.

Bravo. Make the Doublebass 8vb at the end!

These are hard as heck. Still, well put together. Bravo!

Die Stimme klingt ziemlich chaotisch. The violin feels too random to me. There's no real semblance of a theme to latch onto and not enough rests: It's kinda just go, go, go all the time.

A prelude.

I wrote this song precisely last year and arranged it for an orchestra for this website and now here it is in a mellower format, that of a jazz piano arrangement with a brush drum kit. I think it sounds nice overall. I had this song reviewed professionally by a multi award winning songwriter who gave me a B+ for the musical grade so enjoy! As always advice will be appreciated!