Atlantis_ Posted October 20, 2019 Share Posted October 20, 2019 (edited) It is uploading duplicate files. I can not delete one without deleting the other in the playlist. Edited October 21, 2019 by Esper MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Oct 21, 2019 > next Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aMusicComposer Posted October 21, 2019 Share Posted October 21, 2019 (edited) It sounds very nice. It could lead into a mysterious piece, or maybe something brighter. The progression at 0:16 is quite unexpected, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. It flows differently from the rest of this opening. Edited October 21, 2019 by aMusicComposer Typo 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atlantis_ Posted October 21, 2019 Author Share Posted October 21, 2019 Thanks - I need to re-adjust. I'm used to composing with sheet music software. Cubase notating is foreign. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atlantis_ Posted October 22, 2019 Author Share Posted October 22, 2019 I made it less expectant. I am trying to keep the flow consistent. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Oct 21 (2), 2019 > next 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atlantis_ Posted October 22, 2019 Author Share Posted October 22, 2019 (edited) Update. As of now, meant to be played at half volume. Edited October 22, 2019 by Esper MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Oct 22, 2019 > next Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverWolf Posted October 23, 2019 Share Posted October 23, 2019 @Esper It sounds very uplifting what scale/scales did you use? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atlantis_ Posted October 23, 2019 Author Share Posted October 23, 2019 I used boring C -mostly. My music theory is not where it should be. I had to do parts of that over again too. Since the previous sounded like a melodic mess. A lot needs to be redone. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Oct 22 (1), 2019 > next 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverWolf Posted October 23, 2019 Share Posted October 23, 2019 It definitely has a nice theme going! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atlantis_ Posted October 25, 2019 Author Share Posted October 25, 2019 Toned down the randomness. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Oct 24, 2019 > next 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tónskáld Posted October 25, 2019 Share Posted October 25, 2019 Not bad! For an opening it was rather colorful, at least harmonically. Reminds me of many Sibelius symphony openings. Of course, I could give much better feedback once I know "where" this theme is going. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quinn Posted October 25, 2019 Share Posted October 25, 2019 It's basically a lovely sound. I reckon the volume needs upping (or maintaining) at around 0.16" then differentiate the string sounds a bit with dynamics particularly toward the end where it seems to be developing into something. I tend to agree with Tonskald, there's a Sibelian feel about it, 4th or 6th Symphonies. It's going great so far. Don't be afraid to change key somewhere along the line. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Left Unexplained Posted October 25, 2019 Share Posted October 25, 2019 I like it, it's kind of sullen and begging for a resolution. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atlantis_ Posted October 28, 2019 Author Share Posted October 28, 2019 (edited) It does sound similar to Sibelius. I need to redo the beginning and various parts. After that part is ironed out. onto the next 60 seconds. Edited October 28, 2019 by Esper Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jean Szulc Posted October 28, 2019 Share Posted October 28, 2019 I don't really have much feedback to give about this piece. However, I'm writing a piece for string orchestra that is somewhat similar, so if you want to discuss some details and perhaps exchage a few tips about writing this kind of music, feel free to send me a direct message! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Markus Boyd Posted October 28, 2019 Share Posted October 28, 2019 Reminds me of the music of Jeremy Soule - ambient music for exploration and reflection. You obviously need to learn how to develop your ideas though. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atlantis_ Posted October 29, 2019 Author Share Posted October 29, 2019 (edited) Thanks for feedback. I need to extend the beginning. Edited October 29, 2019 by Esper Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atlantis_ Posted October 29, 2019 Author Share Posted October 29, 2019 (edited) Updated. Will need to re-upload later. Edited October 30, 2019 by Esper Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atlantis_ Posted November 2, 2019 Author Share Posted November 2, 2019 (edited) I was thinking of taking it up a scale or insert a previous melody. Please turn up volume to max but it gets a little loud at about :55 seconds. Edited November 4, 2019 by Esper MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Nov 1, 2019 > next Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atlantis_ Posted February 11, 2020 Author Share Posted February 11, 2020 I'm still making minor revisions to this. I am not sure if I should stop on this. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Feb 11, 2020- > next Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted July 10, 2020 Share Posted July 10, 2020 I like the mood you manage to create here. I noticed that the melodic line in your very last revision is lost some of the time. It's too bad because I really enjoyed it in the previous versions of this piece. Are you sure you're not over-revising and changing things that don't need to be changed? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atlantis_ Posted July 11, 2020 Author Share Posted July 11, 2020 8 hours ago, PaperComposer said: I like the mood you manage to create here. I noticed that the melodic line in your very last revision is lost some of the time. It's too bad because I really enjoyed it in the previous versions of this piece. Are you sure you're not over-revising and changing things that don't need to be changed? I do enter analysis paralysis a lot. Sometimes I will focus on 1 part for hours and lose focus. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrotherVIOLA666 Posted July 11, 2020 Share Posted July 11, 2020 i see a bit of film music possibility in this. (IF MADE A BIT MORE MYSTERIOUS) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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